Ants - Haiku
Through tall spring green grasspurposeful continuum,chain gang of ants march.I write in Allinapen
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excellent I have house antsI can't make up whether the middle line is six or sevenno you're right continuum has 4 thingies...smart girlnow your grammar with me it is a guessing gamejan oskar hansen
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Jean, very good, though I would be tempted to invert lines 1 and 3.Through tall spring green grass,purposeful continuum,chain gang of ants march.RGFellowship of the Pen Need some exercise?..The...
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Yes - strangely I did think of the RG and wasn't sure which read best. I'll think about it and probably come back here and swap them around I write in Allinapen
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Cute...really cute. For some reason, I'm seeing ants walking off with something sweet at a summer picnic. Serenity...Brandi"Your friend is your needs answered"- Kahlil Gibran
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"purposeful continuum," yep, that seems to be how they are.Matt Fellowship of the Pen- Unravelling
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